Wednesday, November 13, 2013

How The Buck Got Passed Comments

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It wasn't that he didn't have
clear feelings on the score
but just before the vote, he rose,
turned, left, and quietly shutting the door
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Morgan Michaels
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Bri Edwards 17 August 2015

I would welcome a poet’s note. I really like the flow of this, the continuation from line to line, using correct (I think) English throughout (or almost; well it IS a poem!) . I first thought this would be about a hunter walking by a deer in the woods without noticing it [the deer not the woods]. I was wrong! well I’d like to take the time to praise this poem even more, but I have to go “take a s++t”. sorry. but when I get back I’ll send this to MyPoemList. bri :) p.s. enjoyed the rhyming. and: favorite lines: Rotten luck, at that untimely interval to hear Nature's unrelenting call.

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Michael Morgan 17 August 2015

Forget the deer, the bushes are not my cup of tea. I prefer boardroom drama, any day. Glad you found the piece cathartic. MM

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