Thursday, December 26, 2024

How Sweet Is The Death Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm falling in Love and how the water is deep,
I'm fighting for breath and all reason to keep.
The Waves are now strong, overwhelming in force,
The Most Ancient of tales is now running its course.
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Kevin Hulme
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Michael J Williams 29 December 2024

Powerful… and a bit melancholy

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Kevin Hulme 31 December 2024

Thank you. I used ‘Drowning' as an Analogy for ‘Falling in Love'. Sorry if it's a bit Melancholy.

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