How soon she goes
She grew like an olive branch
Tenderly nurtured and loved
Like a flower full of sap
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Sometimes death comes like a thief in the night snatching our great treasure in just a wink of an eye. A beautiful poem full of images and metaphors. To my Poem List.
A well crafted tribute full of emotions. A reader could feel the pain of a brother who lost his beloved sister.
A deeply touching, poignant and moving poem. It brought tears to my eyes.
Very well penned poem, a lot of great imagery and stunning symbolism, it deserves five stars please take a look at my page too. Thanks
5 Stars full for this very sad poem about the poet's sister's passing, at the moment of this poem, he was on her wake keep, but this poem is through all events a very sad poem that hurts and pains our hearts.
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