Monday, September 11, 2023

How Similar Our Life Is When Compared To A Rice Grain Comments

Rating: 5.0

Rice stirs and steams in a boiler,
does it not reflect the life of humans?

From murky, thick, and hazy waters,
...
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M. Asim Nehal
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Darren Jkoeryo 12 September 2023

Nice comparison done. I admire your creative thinking.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 September 2023

What a marvellous comparison! Rice grain and our life.Wonderfully penned, dear Asim ji....10 + to my favourite

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Kingsley Egbukole 11 September 2023

We pass through several stages of life progresses and each stage has its own challenges to overcome. A beautiful poem

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 11 September 2023

Brilliant piece Asim TFS Bravo! ! ! !

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Anjandev Roy 11 September 2023

This is an excellent piece....as always... thank u....my friend...

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Poetic Sky 11 September 2023

A philosophical poem comparing human life to Rice grain. I enjoyed reading your poem. Yes how well you described 'Sperms' and Ovums and then coming to this world.

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