Wednesday, October 24, 2012

How Silly Is This? ...Or...Does Your Next Move Matter? .....[personal; Life; Death] Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why do I care at all what next I do in life?
After all I'm the boss of me...though I don't say that to my wife.

Well sometimes I do care, but should it really matter?
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Bri Edwards
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Brian Mayo 17 December 2015

Here is an excellent poem. It's both an introduction and a defense- -and is quite interesting on both levels. The poet brilliantly equates 'taking out the garbage' with having a child or writing a poem, and one gets the feeling his list could be endless- -maybe because these are simply a few of the things that prove we're participating in the game of life...? Loved it.

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Bri Edwards 17 November 2024

Brian, besides your first name being near to my heart (and on my birth certificate I think) , your comment is superb. THANKS! !

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Wes Vogler 02 December 2015

I liked it ta 20 characters 20 characters

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Bri Edwards 17 November 2024

IF YOU SAY SO. ? ? ? : )))))))))))))))))))

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