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Thnx for ur comment. I always write down what i am thinking in my mind, sometimes my poems is not smooth or sound werid. I need too much ur guys comments - the seniors :) I will think and fix the last stanza! Wish u have a nice day

Human is burdened with sorrow And forgot the way to love Because they do not know Life is going to wither Quickly this is the only part of the poem i have a serious problem with.........meaning i don't understand it. does it mean that if humans realized how fast their lives would be over (which sounds strange to say) they would NOT be burdened with sorrow and they would REMEMBER the way to love? ? ? ? as i was reading the poem, i wondered if human would be asked. and what would be the human answer? the human answer was a bit of a surprise...No one said anything. i don't agree with the poet completely. there is too much of a generalization (about humans at least) in my opinion. BUT i do like the poem for its cleverness and for its flow. thanks for sharing. some of the english is a little off, but you sound more exotic that way............not just another english-speaker.........and i follow the english well, i think, except perhaps in the last stanza. and thanks to Mj Christopher as well. i have sent it to my poemlist.