Thursday, June 14, 2007

How She Got The Blues Comments

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I saw a picture of her a year ago,
my one time brown-eyed girl.
She looked like she’d hit the pavement,
I guess like the rest of the nation.
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Marc Mannheimer
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Dawn Fuzan 14 May 2014

Marc I enjoyed reading yo poem, keep writing

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Al Ramos 31 December 2007

You were right it's better as a poem and it tell's a good story. I wrote a similar piece called Play Me The Blues. Don't we all experience them every now and then

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Melvina Germain 15 June 2007

Well in the last stanza it certainly looks like you taught her well Marc, that is a wonderful tribute to you. This is a very heart warming poem, I thoroughly enjoyed the read and the outcome was beautiful. Thanks for a soft touch of the heart Marc. Excellent poem, well penned indeed.--Melvina--

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Marc Mannheimer

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