I saw a picture of her a year ago,
my one time brown-eyed girl.
She looked like she’d hit the pavement,
I guess like the rest of the nation.
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You were right it's better as a poem and it tell's a good story. I wrote a similar piece called Play Me The Blues. Don't we all experience them every now and then
Well in the last stanza it certainly looks like you taught her well Marc, that is a wonderful tribute to you. This is a very heart warming poem, I thoroughly enjoyed the read and the outcome was beautiful. Thanks for a soft touch of the heart Marc. Excellent poem, well penned indeed.--Melvina--
Marc I enjoyed reading yo poem, keep writing