Sunday, November 24, 2013

How Shall I Remember You Comments

Rating: 5.0

How shall I remember you
as heavenward I gaze
through clouds of wispy ether
and shimm’ring misty haze.
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Valerie Dohren
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Neela Nath Das 02 December 2013

A beautiful poem on sense of loss.Loved.

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Joseph Anderson 30 November 2013

May your memories be joyful and helpful in filling the void you must face-a beauty in tribute

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Terry M 29 November 2013

I wish you the best, and I can tell you that your heart and your mind will remind you from time to time.

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Dinesan Madathil 29 November 2013

As long as your remembrance goes right by making you live ahead you are a winner Valerie. Your fond memories will be passed on to many of us indirectly who hold human relations great above all. Remember him and let the lost love be returning to you in another form to give a solace.

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Kevin Patrick 28 November 2013

These are words that bring tears, though not to me, but to my heart bound in armour, well crafted and told with the pang of yearning, the idea of lost love immortal.

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Smoky Hoss 28 November 2013

What a very beautiful piece. Wonderful words.

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Valsa George 26 November 2013

Yes, that gentle face is etched in your memory! You have only happy memories to relate to him! So he will continue to blaze your path from an unknown corner! .... Absence makes the heart grow fonder... How true! ! A very moving write coming from the inner depth of your heart!

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Lucifera Santez 26 November 2013

a heart breaking, beautiful piece. achingly beautiful. you are one of my favorite poets Val. i love this piece. :)

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Heather Wilkins 25 November 2013

a beautiful touching poem, remembering a love one even if only in dreams. love this one

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Noreen Carden 25 November 2013

A stunningly beautiful poem i give it a definite ten

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Noreen Carden 25 November 2013

Such a stunningly beautiful poem very touching and sad a beautiful read i give it a definite ten

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John Brown 25 November 2013

True love is forever Val. Though physically parted, your love for each other remains, and always will. Beautiful poem, as always.

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Soumita Sarkar 25 November 2013

Rapturous....TRUE LOVE BEAMING FROM EACH WORD, memories become storehouse of solace......KEEP IT UP!

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Dave Walker 24 November 2013

Memories stay forever, a beautiful poem.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 24 November 2013

they will shine forever not fade, not ever fade. Shine forever. Nicely said in a beautiful poem addressed to him.

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Dee Corpolongo 24 November 2013

Another beautifully written poem with such simple elegance and felt right in my heart. Val, I wish you all the needed strength it will take to help you with your loss Time will help, slowly, but the memories will always be {{{hugs}}} my friend..

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Joseph Anderson 24 November 2013

So delicately beautiful. With great simplicity you have crafted a poignant and moving tribute for your lost love. You truly inspire me

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Paul Brookes 24 November 2013

Beautiful poem which really moved me. Memories always stay locked in the heart and love never dies. Good write BB : O))

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