Friday, December 22, 2017

How Naughty I Am Born Comments

Rating: 5.0

"Is it the night that follows a day
Or it's a day that follows a night
Dear sun do you follow the moon
Or moon is the mirror for your light."
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Akhtar Jawad
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Mahtab Bangalee 30 May 2018

excellent writing - I am throwing warm light on all her parts Content by watching only her exciting Waiting for a day when this girl is excited I shall let her know how naughty I am born! great 10++++

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Loke Kok Yee 05 January 2018

A poet who sees love in everything and craft it into beautiful poems. A great poet indeed. Thank you sir.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 December 2017

Very romantic write indeed! Only a poet through his powerful imagination can see an ocean through a spoon of water……You have very aptly used the simile here……that is the beauty of poetry! Liked your composition! !

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Rini Shibu 22 December 2017

Beautifully written, the love of sun and moon, romantic presentation

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