Wednesday, June 18, 2008

How Much Sinful Are Thee? Comments

Rating: 4.5

Sin, what is your understanding
Mine is this
Any act that will have reasons
For you to regret later is a sin
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Bashyam Narayanan
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Greenwolfe 1962 01 July 2008

This reads like a school lecture, and that is why I only gave it a 7. Poetry or prose should haver one characteristic above all others, it must be something people would want to read. I may be wrong, but I do not believe anyone would stand in this line. GW62

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Marvin Brato 18 June 2008

Faith without deed is dead, just like thoughts without action! Nice poem, very thought provoking lesson. A 10.

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