Wednesday, November 16, 2022

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It's so hard just too feel,
To know what's fantasy to know what's real
To look into your eyes and see the truth.
How much of this is me,
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keith brown
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Risa Kavak Asir 16 November 2022

Very nice poem. Can be made even better with a few changes: line 1 'to' instead of 'too'. Lines 10 and 21, did you mean YOU'RE instead of YOUR?

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