Sunday, April 11, 2010

How May I Help You? Comments

Rating: 4.1

How may I help you?
The ten million-dollar question
Me and some souls dubbed reps
Take delight in asking by obligation
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Kolawole Ajao
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Babatunde Aremu 25 July 2014

Well written. Its strange that our reps become elusive to the people. Thanks for sharing

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Joseph Poewhit 25 July 2013

We all get lost in our perceived worlds.

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Issam Hal 27 July 2012

Great poem it's described in a beautiful way

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Nurain Ali-balogun 11 July 2012

Not bad man, not bad at all...actually, very good one. And it made me giggle.

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James Lagoski 26 July 2010

Dear Kolawole~ I thought this was clever and interesting! Your descriptional abilty is unique and that attributes a good writer. Best Wishes to You~ Peace~James

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Dwi Utami 18 July 2010

execelent god choice this poem, god: thumb: +10 for you

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Zaynab Elzain 09 July 2010

i like this poem it's kinda funny... gd poem

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Michael Brock 18 April 2010

Enjoyed this one very much, I like the imagery very well, and I find that these words are very true. Many times I have heard these words, and wondered. Very well done thanks for sharing Michael

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Seraphim Foxette 11 April 2010

i really love this poem its great!

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Kolawole Ajao

Kolawole Ajao

Akure, Ondo State Nigeria
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