Friday, December 18, 2009

How Many Times Have I Counted The Stars Comments

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How many times have i counted the stars
Looking at them they never seemed that far
Within those eyes I feel like I want to cry
Is it out of fear, love, happiness?
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Nathan Barkley
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Søren Valentine 24 March 2014

Oi mate this is really good! I like the picture of counting the stars, they are special to me. Also, I absolutely love the imagery of flower petals floating ever so gently on a river of pain knowing that is isn't gentle at all. Every ripple that petal causes will bring so much back, and like you mentioned, those petals come back later on. I really liked this!

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Nathan Chilton 23 March 2010

This is a really good poem to read i wish you luck mate love and light nathan cx

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