How Many Times? Comments

I hope this isnt firsthand. I felt the frusteration and anger. They hit you once, theyll do it again

dev- I can feel your frustration while you were writing this. Your helplessness and care for whoever this woman is practically dripping off the page. Good write my friend. constructive feedback: the ending was strong but abrupt in a bad way, try to ease into it a bit more and if you decide to do some rhymes you should try to rhyme the entire way to make the poem smooth.