Tell me during the march of life if we get a lake?
A lonely one where privacy isn't at the stake.
Where nobody is there to watch our mistake,
Put off, wash it, a new dressing we cannot make,
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How many miles more for the sin of love? O LOVE POET JA SAHAB JI WHY DO YOU CALL LOVE SIN IT'S HEAVENS NATURAL SERMON BUT HOW HAPPY I BE EVERY TIME I READ THEE NEWER IDEAS TAKE BIRTH YOU CALL IT SIN I HUMAN'S DESIRED WORTH WHY SI JA JI WE MUST LOVE ALWAYS ETERNALLY INTERNALLY YOU CANNOT SIN YOU ARE TOO LOVELY
Akhtar Jawad can present any thought in the form of a love poem.
great, yeah greatly penned //// for the friendship yeah, for the old blessings put off the SlN cloth clear up enmity block ....................//////
Liked the second stanza embellished with great imagery and vivid portrayal of war.led by ruthless leaders. Another poem of great depth by a great Poet. Onto my Poem List.
Another wonderful, powerful and insightful write on love and friendship. A meaningful and timely message for humanity especially at this time where hate and war are often undertaken to settle differences among nations and human beings.
A serious read, a sublimest poem, Akhtar Sir! A 10 full score for this amazing poem. Thank you for sharing.
Let the clouds rise, trees dance, and birds fly, And what of beasts, let them roar and cry, A question is asked by a peace loving dove How many miles more for the sin of love? ........brilliant expression with lofty theme. A marvelous poem is astutely delineated.10