How Many Knocks? Comments

Fantastic just as I remember, I look forward to reading more or your delightful poetry.....

oh criminy, now I see why Elys told me to read you. She says hello. This is write that appeals on several layers. skill, emotion, the inclination for a reader to urge the underdog on to victory... well done, poet

Gosh, an epic write Duncan and yet you kept the storyline flowing really well, A lovely tale and what I like to hear, a happy ending. Very well achieved. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

A brilliant and most inspiring write. Thank you for sharing this with us. Andrew '10'

Inspiring and heartwrenching. True poetry, Duncan! ~Ray

Duncan, You poems bring inspiration to me, as I'm sure they do for many others. The subject of a dream that seems real intrigues me. I've had several myself that I do believe are messages.

Wowsa Wowsy Wow! Wow! What a great read, kind sir of the well written word! Inspiration in its purist form! God bless all poets and readers alike-MJG.

Wow! A great piece of detailed narration.

What a mystery and what a captivating piece of work to read. You've done well with this one. I liked it and the way you ended it too. EXCELLENT JOB! ! !

Where were you when I needed to hear all this? ? ? ? ? ? ? ....Why didnt anyone ever tell me? ? ? ...Where was everyone? ? ? ? ... duncan you really know what you are talking about....thank you for sharing this poem with me....love LeilaXXXX

Duncan, I looked at the size of this poem in dismay and said oh, help. But as I started to read, the message became ever so clear as one line ran into another. I read with the pace of a galloping horse across a meadow free. I couldn't stop for fear of falling before I reached the end. And when I reached the end the message read to me, was that of a magnificent poem of family unity. WOW, this was long as it was beautifully painted all the way. Thanks for pointing me in its direction today. David

How did I ever miss this one… magnificent!

Dear Duncan I read the Poem and others comments, there is not much more to say, it was a pleasure to read such a generous view of despicable deeds, compassion can surely set us all free.

There is always that message if only it can be heard.... Alison

Thank you for this Duncan... I feel the story you tell too well. Compassion is what we need more in this world, and there are people out there that do this. Bless your heart Duncan, for a story well told! ~Lee

well told story, Duncan, with great structure and rhyme. compassionate end for troubling events makes this a worthwhile read. especially enjoyable mystic desert vision. fine work. -Tailor

A very moving poem, sounds so familiar. A great poem. Thank you, Donna

Duncan this is a splendid poem with a sad beginning, building up to a beautiful, spiritual end. It shows that God is always watching, and if we listen to the whispers and follow our feelings, we will end up doing the right thing. Your uncle listened to the whispers. Excellent epic once again, I loved reading this story, the same holds true for many families unfortunately and many of them don't end up with a happy ending. Thankyou so much for sharing--Melvina--

Duncan This is just Majestic, this poem should be in a liberia amonst other rare works because I have found that since I have been reading your poetry you have a master way of presenting it. Cheers Sylvie

Incredible! ! I; ve said it before, but I am truly in awe of your wonderful ability to craft poetry so well. This is a wonderful story...thank you for sharing it with me. I'm glad you pointed it out to me. Thanks. Hugs, Dee