Sunday, April 2, 2006

How Lovely In The Garden Are Your Eyes Comments

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“How lovely in the garden are your eyes,
your lips, your mouth, your breasts, you legs! ” I say,
but she rejects my comments: “Is it wise
to comment about parts that I display
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Gina Onyemaechi 03 April 2006

'...the play that comes before the fore': ha ha ha! ! Oh, Gersh, amongst your many other talents, you are a natural comedian. I'm not blind to the shallowness of the speaker here though (Adam through the ages) . But I rather think that this is the whole point to the story. And I've enjoyed it. Gina.

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Mike Finley 02 April 2006

Rhyming starless with carless... oh carless love! This is quite an essay, Gershon. I enjoyed it.

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