Wednesday, June 3, 2009

How Love Has To Deal Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm Sorry for the pain i've caused
the tears we had to cry
the anger we felt so deep inside
the torment and the anguish that stood at our sides
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Amy Ormonde
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Onyx Blake 21 June 2009

Wow. Is this about getting domestic abuse. Amywho, niceley done. Bravo.

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Keith Young 19 June 2009

Again very good poem who did u write these poems on

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from the heart through the ink to the paper.. keep writing.

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Ejaz Khan 17 June 2009

Nicely penned Amy, keep it up! I hope you'll keep growing.

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Kyle Jones 17 June 2009

It seems cliche to blame yourself in these situation, yet when beautifully written the underlying and defining reasons behind love show through, much like real life.Well written

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 12 June 2009

Your poem flows like a river within a river.The conflicts are so beautiful.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 08 June 2009

A bitter poem with reactionary feelings but emotions expressed in a simple way rather making them complex. I wish you could deal the love in some better way. Please keep on writing, it will console you. Best Wishes Naseer

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