I'm Sorry for the pain i've caused
the tears we had to cry
the anger we felt so deep inside
the torment and the anguish that stood at our sides
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from the heart through the ink to the paper.. keep writing.
It seems cliche to blame yourself in these situation, yet when beautifully written the underlying and defining reasons behind love show through, much like real life.Well written
Your poem flows like a river within a river.The conflicts are so beautiful.
A bitter poem with reactionary feelings but emotions expressed in a simple way rather making them complex. I wish you could deal the love in some better way. Please keep on writing, it will console you. Best Wishes Naseer
Wow. Is this about getting domestic abuse. Amywho, niceley done. Bravo.