How Long To Go? Comments

Interesting and well written

Brilliant structure...great progression, I enjoyed it. Although I have a different idea about impending transformation, I can relate to past feelings. nice, cheers! BG

Loved this, very interesting and impressive

nice one jim made me laugh and sad at the same time love the twist at the end keep up the good work 10 here jim

The worst part of waiting till the last moment to get right with the Lord is all the wasted time that came before besides, as you point out, we never know when that last moment my come. A very powerful write indeed my friend. Thank you. Richard

Fantastic subject, Jim. I wish I had come up with this idea! I love the way the clock ticks down as we read through and the ever-present undercurrent of regret at time running out. The regret being - putting off something until tomorrow when tomorrow never comes. There is a valuable lesson for us all in this excellent piece of writing. \thanks for reminding me to cherish every moment.

really wonderful thought provoking poem. beautiful write 10/10 love frm sumaira

Yesterday is gone forever, Tomorrow never comes. That only leaves today And today is a gift and well worth living. A wonderful, thought provoking write. Strength for the journey, my poet friend. Warm regards, Sandra

Time ticks away so fast and this poem really tells that story...excellent write Jim...thank you...Fi 10+

Jim, Oh theres so much truth to this poem. Do you suppose the replay will be more rewarding as you see each day as a wonderful gift?