Wednesday, December 10, 2008

**********how Long The Dream Can Dance Comments

Rating: 4.4

Her questiion- 'Anything wrong? ' He didn't answer but in his mind the song- 'I love you' all the day.
Singing or thinking or sinking……
The function- two sort,
Within - soundless, wordless that silence witness.
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sarwar chowdhury
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 06 October 2009

‘Is it true always that love breeds love? ’ Multi-polar answer: yes no both or nothing and relative. Ten++ Ms. Nivedita Cordially invite to my page and thanks for comment. New post Poetically Noetically

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Seema Gupta 23 September 2009

how true......amezing thoughts ya. regards

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Mubeen Sadhika 16 August 2009

Graceful narration. Repeatedly lingering in mind.

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Is it true always that love breeds love? Why waves are elating for the time being? Ah! Ever if they get into….... love breeds love andhate breeds hate...... beautiful write dear...10 leave mine o, mother and papa do u knwo and papa u too

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Gargi Saha 07 January 2009

WELL WRITTEN. U GET 10++++++++++...........

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Karol Valencia 17 December 2008

that was really good......it's so true.how do u come up with ur poems?

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Raihana Abdul Jabbar 16 December 2008

yes.....this is truth...love breeds love.....i love this poem....it has a quaint charm...10

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Viola Grey 15 December 2008

I'm not sure I agree that 'love breeds love'....but that's is the beauty of poetry, it's our soul we put on the paper and we all have our own way of seeing things....nice work

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 14 December 2008

flowers love him at first sight... love breeds love... Stunning love poem, thanks for sharing 10

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 13 December 2008

wow....loved this poem..... amazingly composed.....words echo their emotions very well sir...thank you.

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Naru Kaede 13 December 2008

This is a great poem! Problem between the man and the woman, Woman it's always need explicitness from man, they always want to be respect, But some man usually can't make it true, sometime they just silence and choose To talk when the perfect time is come, but woman it's always impatient, , , I just can smile when read this, you can truly understand what the problem, Good penned, Regard, Naru Kaede, ,

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Linda Moore 13 December 2008

This is an interesting poem, I like it very much as to How long the Dream can Dance is debatable. Love can last forever but a woman may only wait for a while for you to declare yourself if she wants a family. Men have a much longer window of opportunity to become a parent. Love is always a risk.....10

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Seema Aarella 12 December 2008

wow..a dancing dream it is indeed! The dual nature of a lover's emotions, that thrives to show itself...but still silently yearns inside! A beautiful picture of the lover's internal dilemma......10 from me sarwar!

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Linda Winchell 12 December 2008

Not my style of poetry but very beautiful words indeed. More like a letter. Ten, Linda

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Shelby L 12 December 2008

Another work of art. Its fantastic, keep up the great work. Looking forward to more of your writings. S.H.

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Kite Remedy 12 December 2008

Mysterious yet interesting to read, that's great to know what inside of your love's mind.. Beautiful writing.. I like it more than much..

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Stacey Watts 11 December 2008

Very beautifully written full of imagery. Great piece.

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 11 December 2008

Interestingg read, Loyd

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Tissa Calvert 11 December 2008

very good way of putting love I couldn't do it better myself

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Meggie Gultiano 11 December 2008

a beautiful write. thanks for the sharing

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sarwar chowdhury

sarwar chowdhury

Origin- Bangladesh, Living abroad.
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