How Long Comments

God will do things in His Time, not in ours. He keeps His promise. Forcing Him is no use, but pay attention He will fulfill His promise, but never forget IN HIS TIME. Thank YOU so much for this very impressive poem.

Heartfelt poem, the pain of separation is nicely conveyed via this poem. Awesome 100******

Absolute beauty of a poem. Love can be expressed with so much emotion and depth. Thanks for sharing the same. Much impressed with the poem. Kindly permit me to translate the same into Hindi. Thanks.

When God looked down And saw you and me He knew we will make Heaven on earth Beautiful lines of a lovely poem,

With one tight hug of yours You filled my emptiness And the joy I received Is far beyond my imagination......Gods were jealous, angels and saints were jealous..... but now separated and lonely. how long shall i cry..........touching and delicate poem. than k u. tony

Another beautiful and touching poem

Very touching poem. Keep writing

Very beautiful. But so sad.

so touchingly sad at Times God doesn't realise but to convert one into a rare poet he just tries 'tis my surmise reading u poetry wise u earn a poetic prize

Another excellent poem. Great flow of words, that pictures from the time you met till you both parted. Praying you both meet each other again soon, and we see new poems from you that describes your joining together – poems of joy and dance. May both of you abide in love with each other and build Heaven on Earth. God Bless. Good Job. Keep it up.

Very heart touching poem about lovers who can't unite and enjoy conjugal bliss. simple and beautiful Keep up.

lovely poem penned /// lovely line- I pen down my pain daily