Tuesday, October 28, 2008

How Long Comments

Rating: 4.5

‘How long is it dear, since we were wed,
when first I ventured into your bed.
We’ve made it through together since then,
time filled with laughter, and counting to ten’.
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Ernestine Northover
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 29 August 2017

Funny jokes told and stories so sad, accepting good, along with the bad’. Beautiful poem to read. 10.

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Anthony Acquah 04 August 2016

I Like the rhyming of the last two words of each of the lines

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Anthony Acquah 04 August 2016

I Like the rhyming of the last two words of each of the lines.Love that is true is never ending lovely

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Anthony Acquah 04 August 2016

I Like the rhyming of the last two words of each of the lines.There appears to have been lots of thought and love gone into writing this poem

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Andrew Blakemore 10 November 2008

A lovely poem Ernestine, so warm and full of tenderness. Well done, love Andrew xx

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Lynda Robson 29 October 2008

How charming Ernestine, a couple growing old together and time passing, but they are still in love, excellent write, 10 Lynda xx

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David Taylor 29 October 2008

I love this one Ernestine, just so gentle it somehow coneys the love in its gentle expression. David.

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