How Life Become Meaningless Comments

Thinking very clever of themselves, They keep changing as they like, As if they achieved something great. The reality of cheating others. and how they think that they have won. in fact they loose. different types of people we meet in our lives. thank you very much.

How very true! You have presented one of the bitter truths of life in such a simple yet great way. This poem reminds me of an old song from the Eagles band - called 'Lying Eyes'.

Different type of flow from others, which releases what is on your mind and tells the theme well. Certainly gets the mind thinking, well done.

Bright the reality Brighter let it turn With each gray hair Let Wisdom burn A torch brighter, my lord Envisaged it in cyclic turn Kick bitterness On its bum Hearty energies harnessed Join hands come!

' Nothing is for sure in life, Everything keep changing, And Life is so mechanical..' Yes, its true. Very thoughtful poem. Well said.10+ Thanks for sharing with me

Absolutely true people in this category better understand it before they get late. Rgds Noor

as time changes from hours to day and rain to summer by gale today turns tomorrow from yesterwind as tide and ebb riffles by crest and trough, all seems to be relative by their ways, beautiful write by imagery,10+++, thanks for sharing

A giant truth, so nicely expressed. When we were young it seemed so cool and popular. Different girlfriends give some ego gratifications, but these were so extremely small when compared to how much it hurted our soul once we realise how much cutting pain it caused. A giant truth very nicely expressed.

Thats the tragedy of life by the time a person knows about it its too late.Very thoughtful.lovely poem

Very well composed poem, Sreekala

May be one day they will face reality, By then time has taken their age, Life comes to a stand still. liked this conculsion.. the liers in life face realtiy. as u say so weill, the y think that they are clever.. but the reality is that they fool themselves. so much wisdom you share with us in this poem. thank you sreekala