Monday, August 27, 2018

How I Write Poems Comments

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Shutting all doors to the external chive
allow inner being to become active
As feelings start bubbling up, from dive
turn some in to characters, to go in hive
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 14 September 2018

Temper, garnish and serve for the self-server to enjoy let the taster judge it's worth true to his/her conscience Enjoyed your poem, Jayatissa. God bless

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 15 September 2018

Thank you Geetha for your encouraging comment.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 August 2018

This poem 'How I Write Poems' is being so astutely and incisively delineated. The way of presentation is so amusing. I quote..... Rearrange them in patterns, lovable readable, listenable and memorable Make it, if possible a bit sensational, allow then, to season and mature, as well Thanks for sharing.

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 28 August 2018

My heartfelt thanks to you Kumar, for the generous comment.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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