When I crushed into you,
My world swiftly crumbled.
Was I picking up the pieces?
On my knees begging you
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Another beautiful piece on the whimsical and temperamental nature of love, well articulated and elegantly brought forth from the heart. Sad tale of love told in eloquent finesse. A lovely creation. Thanks for sharing Lungelo and do remain enriched.
Thanks, my friend for your positive comments on my work..... Sometimes we love and forget the reality that that person will one day be gone and leave us with pains and grievance...
Love that is one way is truly a heartbreaking experience, more so when that love was once shared by both.
I'm stunned by this poem....it's emotional filled, well articulated...just bring sadness to my heart Wonderful craft work...10++++++++
Thanks man for such wonderful comments