Saturday, February 20, 2010

How I Wish I Could Dream My Life Away Comments

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If only I could evanesce from reality,
And fall into a slumber no force could wake me up from.
So I could dream aoftly and tenderly
Of gossamer clouds above slender Eucalyptus trees,
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Luna Moon
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Wow, this poem just puts my mind in the clouds. I can see and feel what you are describing. Great diction. My favorite line is 'And smell the vanilla in the breeze that lightly envelopes me in joy'. That's so cool.

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