I saw a rose radiant in the morn
How I wish it has no hurting thorn!
I stood on the shore of the tumultuous sea
I wish seagull's wings to fly along in glee.
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An amazing poem coming out of an innocent heart but with a philosophical undertone. Thanks and Congrats. A pleasure to read.
Wishes are waiting in time for realization, Very nice poem. Congrats for being chosen for POD.
This poem has a good structure and rhythm and the contrasts shown between the sights and the reality in the pairs of lines, is a great idea. I feel that the forced rhymes detract somewhat from what could be a really good poem.
Just pleasantly lovely. Well done and congrats on poem of the day
I saw a rose radiant in the morn How I wish it has no hurting thorn! love of nature will purify us always............ a fine purified soul.......... tony
A sweet poem indeed. wish to wake up in the early dawn to witness this majestic view. So nice. Deserved to be the Poem of the day.10+++++
I saw a rose radiant in the morn How I wish it has no hurting thorn! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - I wish to see two crescents in a while As I behold twin tusks of the elephant, smile Wishes a few come true at times, The Bell of luck rarely chimes! - - - - - - - - A lovely poem about our dreams and wishes out of which many remain unfulfilled.
Simply amazing poem of the day, Minnoor. Congrats for being chosen...........
It is a fantastic wish by poet to focus and target only optimistic side of the life. Though life is a mixture of both. Congrats for the honour POTD.