Wednesday, June 25, 2014

How I Want To Live.. Comments

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I don't want to live with your memories, my whole life.
I want to live with you, if you know, by my side.

I don't want to live with my eyes closed, black and white.
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Kirti Sharma
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Sonali Ganguly 05 April 2016

the beautiful creation would definitely make you live your life just as you wish it to be. nice verse...

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Kirti Sharma 16 February 2016

thank you all for your motivating comments.. :)

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 February 2016

I want to live with the colors, like the rainbow, always present in the sky. i want to love and be loved. hopes of a wonderful future.. pray so that all your desires may come to fulfillment. tony

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Howard Savage 03 January 2016

Great poem. Deal with reality.

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want to live with you, .. nice line....10 live with you stay with you and if necessary with cheers and feel no sorry

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Geetha Jayakumar 10 July 2014

Lovely and positive poem. I loved reading each lines. Very true said, I don't want hatred but love from all, whom you love..

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Khairul Ahsan 07 July 2014

This is really a wonderful poem. What you have described, as to how you want to live, is perhaps a desire shared by every loving heart. The last stanza is simply superb!

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Amitava Sur 30 June 2014

A lovely picture of a joyous life is being dreamed here giving a pristine feeling in mind.... Enjoyed

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Leah Ayliffe 28 June 2014

This is a really lovely poem, I don't want to sit still, living in a corner, dark and gloom. I want to live dancing, with the leaves in the breeze, in the light of the moon. such beautiful lines!

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Saurav Singh 26 June 2014

What an expressive poem! : -) Ma`am so true is the expression, love makes our life worth living, colorful, a party. True love stays for ever by our side. A beautiful and a powerful poem. : -) i like it! !

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