He took her there
in front of all-
The searing kiss
in a hot embrace-
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beautifullllllllll! ! ! this has become one of my most favorite poems, ever! you described the scene so well, yet real. So GOOD! thanks for your great sweet thought!
Aaaah, The Kiss... The First Symbolic Merging... Very Passionate Write... Classy and Touching... This could be a great prelude to a great love-story... Moonbee