Wednesday, November 18, 2009

How I Want My Kiss Comments

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He took her there
in front of all-
The searing kiss
in a hot embrace-
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I Am Charlie
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Moonbee Canady 19 November 2009

Aaaah, The Kiss... The First Symbolic Merging... Very Passionate Write... Classy and Touching... This could be a great prelude to a great love-story... Moonbee

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Sabrina Jubahar 18 November 2009

beautifullllllllll! ! ! this has become one of my most favorite poems, ever! you described the scene so well, yet real. So GOOD! thanks for your great sweet thought!

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