Friday, January 11, 2008

{{{ How I See Our World }}} Comments

Rating: 4.8

Viewing our world as one nation,
I see it is suffering from broken communication,
for we're always plagued by anticipation.
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Linda I. Weischedel
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Linda Moore 14 June 2009

Very true, Our World has many concerns to be addressed. You have done a great job here, many feel as you do. We must keep a positive attitude for change.......10

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Ben Gieske 23 June 2008

You do well voicing the concerns of the common person. We keep asking and never get satisfying answers. This part stands out for me: 'it's not a cause....it's a cost'. It's seems like nothing is free. We always have to pay in some way even in learning.

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Bob House 21 January 2008

Good stuff and strong sentiment. Thanks for showing me I'm not the only one that thinks along the same lines. Are there enough to make a difference? I have similar thoughts in my poem entitled New Faith. Keep writing!

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Meggie Gultiano 20 January 2008

A strong and powerful message, Linda. I love the way you presented this. You did this from your heart.

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Ricky Owen 18 January 2008

You spoke the truth, come straight from the heart. Wonderful poem Kindest Regards Ricky

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Alison Smith 13 January 2008

Its a sad truth about this world we all had a part in creating. That now the predominate power is the power of greed. Its not hold my hand I'll help you, its give me your hand and help me. Nice write. Alison

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Broken Peaces 11 January 2008

Cracking write Linda the truth the whole truth and nothing but the truth, admiration Chris

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Ying Escalona 11 January 2008

yes...its mutual destruction.................

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Linda I. Weischedel

Linda I. Weischedel

Philadelphia, PA
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