Viewing our world as one nation,
I see it is suffering from broken communication,
for we're always plagued by anticipation.
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You do well voicing the concerns of the common person. We keep asking and never get satisfying answers. This part stands out for me: 'it's not a cause....it's a cost'. It's seems like nothing is free. We always have to pay in some way even in learning.
Good stuff and strong sentiment. Thanks for showing me I'm not the only one that thinks along the same lines. Are there enough to make a difference? I have similar thoughts in my poem entitled New Faith. Keep writing!
A strong and powerful message, Linda. I love the way you presented this. You did this from your heart.
You spoke the truth, come straight from the heart. Wonderful poem Kindest Regards Ricky
Its a sad truth about this world we all had a part in creating. That now the predominate power is the power of greed. Its not hold my hand I'll help you, its give me your hand and help me. Nice write. Alison
Cracking write Linda the truth the whole truth and nothing but the truth, admiration Chris
Very true, Our World has many concerns to be addressed. You have done a great job here, many feel as you do. We must keep a positive attitude for change.......10