How I Proposed....... Comments

Beautiful romantic poem nicely penned from inner recesses of the heart with conviction. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing Neetha and do remain enriched.

A wonderful imagination dear Neetha.. so nice i chuckled as i finished reading. it is rhythmic. thank you

ice breaking! ! ! nicely penned down Neetha, keep going: -)

congrat the rising star crossed horizone.keep going ahead

nice poem, i like it verry much

nice but u can stop at 'we moved on hand in hand '. It might better

Very nice job, Neetha, the budding star of Poem Hunter!

good writing, you got the feeling in there when the green eyed monster raised its head, nice one.

I love this! ! ! Keep up the good work- CAK

Good poetry. I like it a lot. You have a great rime scheme, and I must say, you are a good poet. Keep writing, and you will continue to get better. You're doing a great job.

I was turning to go when i heard a 'yo'. She came to me n said 'meet my brother..come n sit' We chatted and he parted We looked at each other n started.. 'I LOVE...' n burst out laughing and i gave her the ring.. touch and go..... :) amazing speed there... be happy yer lines were nice reading cheers

i found ur poems beautiful and interesting. go on

VERY MUCH HOPE IS THERE IN UR POEM NEETHA..

Thats a very elegant peace of work.Keep it up you've out done many with this piece of work.

Nice rhymes sister... :) like it