Monday, December 22, 2014

How I Once Spent A Friday Afternoon Comments

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And this one
then that one
try another one
not just yet
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M.J. Lemon
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Richard Wlodarski 11 July 2017

M. J., this poem reminds me of Margaret and I at The Bay testing colognes. She was driving me and the sales clerk totally bananas. She and I are no longer an item, but I still use variations of that same cologne. Go figure!

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Mj Lemon 11 July 2017

Richard, thank you so much. I hope I awoke great memories. And yes, we were at The Bay the afternoon that inspired this poem. Thanks again.

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Bri Edwards 13 December 2016

i see i left a comment nearly two years ago. i stand by it; i had similar thoughts today as i read it twice, having forgotten i read it previously. bri :)

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Mj Lemon 15 December 2016

Great comment (again) ...Indeed, words to stand by!

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 September 2016

Being very busy! Thanks for sharing.

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Mj Lemon 09 September 2016

It remains maybe my most memorable Friday. Thanks, Edward.

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Kevin Patrick 24 March 2016

Although I'm flustered at this word buster it sounds like you know how to spend a Friday, life's a box of chocolate, you get black and red.

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Mj Lemon 24 March 2016

Thanks Kevin. Yes, life can be a box...

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Melvina Germain 05 October 2015

This is an interesting poem, one I would come back to again and again trying to dip into the head of the poet. I feel the mind is racing in this one, that one...I like it because it tugs at me.....

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Mj Lemon 14 October 2015

Thank you so much! I am happy your thoughts were racing...what I tried to do was compress hours of activity into just a few seconds...

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Bri Edwards 12 March 2015

who SAID this is a hot poem? see previous poem comment. well, not for everybody i guess! were you trying on shirts which your partner ordered for you through 'the mail'? you have my condolances! bri :) p.s. i hope you kept the green and brown ones! my favorite colors. that you demand, that you command ............................my favorite line

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Mj Lemon 14 March 2015

Too funny! But no, this wasn't me trying on shirts. This was from an actual date some years ago. I was the bystander...and the afternoon went on, and on and on...for about three hours.

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Mj Lemon 14 March 2015

Too funny! But no, this wasn't me trying on shirts. This was from an actual date some years ago. I was the bystander...and the afternoon went on, and on and on...for about three hours.

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Francie Lynch 16 January 2015

This is a hot poem? Why?

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