Wednesday, June 17, 2009

How I Knew You? Comments

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I have known you my whole life
you were all that i have
you brightned my day
you were the hero of my life
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Alem Hailu G/kristos 30 November 2015

I think your lover has ceased to be before you know what was happening! what an interesting work.The way you expressed it via word pictures is also nice keep it up!

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Zufan Kassa 25 June 2009

you did a great job.

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~ Jon London ~ 18 June 2009

Very touching piece, you've expressed your emotion well...the sofness of your voice delivers the poem with impact....great work...keep expressing you have a gift...use it wisely

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