I have known you my whole life
you were all that i have
you brightned my day
you were the hero of my life
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Very touching piece, you've expressed your emotion well...the sofness of your voice delivers the poem with impact....great work...keep expressing you have a gift...use it wisely
I think your lover has ceased to be before you know what was happening! what an interesting work.The way you expressed it via word pictures is also nice keep it up!