Friday, September 26, 2008

How I Feel Now Comments

Rating: 4.8

After a long while, i now need to sit and think
as a lot has happened in my life i thought was still very short.
I now miss my brothers and sisters, so much
that i sometimes go to bed when i don't feel sleepy
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Adedolapo Olisa
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Sathyanarayana M V S 09 October 2008

The loss made you really so philosophical u are almost touching the peaks of spiritual emotions and ecstacy.....great write....that wanders from loss of siblings to a myriad images and pictures.......wonderful

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David Desantis 02 October 2008

very very sad...im sorry for your loss...

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Caterpillar MC 01 October 2008

Its a nice poem and makes you want to remember the times with family. sweet and painful. A 10

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Ryan Thompson 01 October 2008

good im impressed -ryan

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Al Ramos 01 October 2008

Great stuff, written from the heart where all feelings lay until releasd for all to enjoy.

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Poem self confession, with sensitive thoughts on true destination of life, with or close to the beloved ones. The line 'I now dream of love! love! ! love! ! ! ' is the major spot of this praise of love. Thanks for sharing Adedolabo. Joseph Josephides - Member of the Inter. Society of Poets (ISP) (award by Intern.Library of Poetry)

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Adedolapo Olisa

Adedolapo Olisa

Ilorin, Kwara state.
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