Tuesday, February 22, 2005

How I Feel Comments

Rating: 3.8

As i look at you
my heart tumbles to
the bottom of my stomach
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joshua treece
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Kelly Allen Vinal 22 February 2005

not bad at all. I would like to see a bit more clarification regarding how the protagonist appears to be looking at someone he misses. Is he looking at a photo or video of somebody passed?

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