Saturday, July 19, 2008

How I Do Battle Comments

Rating: 3.1

Desert....
Sunwhelmed, hot, wild...
Tempestuous, arrogant
Capricious sanddunes
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Kesav Easwaran 02 February 2009

the fire with in...our battle with this fire is constantly on...challenging or not...good insightful piece, Wardha...10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 12 October 2008

A very nice short poem.

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Whitney Nicole Albright* 21 September 2008

Thanks for my comment. Love this one.

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There’s fire within Challenging the fire Without I stand silent At war! ! Darn how could have I missed this one? ? ? Ne plus ultra! !

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Gone with the wind 23 July 2008

At night the desert is cold, breeze flows within, light, calm, shady coz its dark and the fire is a tasting snow....and the day desert is what you said...there's desert inside us when we are at war and a paradise when we are at peace....wonderful job ' I stand shadeless I stand shadowless' a hearty 10: -) Gul

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