James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
Tuesday, July 14, 2009

How He Made You Cry Comments

Rating: 4.6

Did he make it hard....
For you to cry...
Do..
Those tears well up..
...
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James McLain
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expressionful... very nice.

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Bethany Williams 18 July 2009

This is a sad poem. Its also a great poem.

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Ency Bearis 15 July 2009

an honest and sincrre querry for a person...emotionally how the person feels... well presented write in poetic diction.....10 (see my poem ' Always ' let me see if it will touch your heart too)

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. . 14 July 2009

The current is dark...in fear she withers...It speaks and I tremble...

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Isaac Maliya 14 July 2009

That's a very nice poem as usual from you! It begs a sincere response from the lass! 10 rated!

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that's really nice. well written, with sincerity.

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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