how handsome is one toe;
to say it is,
but just to me how gentle is too stone.
and what will i give up instead and truth,
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lol this is very naugty! Of course it makes you look again... Toes are supposed to keep you balancing! Smiling at you Tai
I loved this; it's really perfect; but when I read the end I thought that it said, 'it makes me want to look again..' and that would work too and not change the meaning at all. But it's perfectly lovely just like it's done now.