Thursday, April 2, 2009

How Good Was Youth! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Thru the jungle of your sleep
I had a passage of my dreams
You had a bookish face
I had a school bag in my hand.
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir
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M Asim Nehal 12 July 2016

Outstanding poem, short yet poignant.......10++

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Rajesh Kumar 31 May 2009

Make an E-Book so that I can down load and read at leisure.

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Rajesh Kumar 31 May 2009

Naseer Bhai, I am your fan. Outstanding poetry. If you were to publish a book, I will be the first one to buy it. Rajesh

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Sandra Fowler 19 April 2009

Time will have us all, but we will always have the gift of imagery. Beautiful write, Naseer. Warm regards, Sandra

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Mark R Slaughter 16 April 2009

Such power in so few words - I enjoy these thought-provoking and stirring considerations of yours. Mark

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Duh Huh 15 April 2009

Ah youth, if not for the memories, i'd think i skipped mine :) Thank you for sharing.

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Bob Blackwell 08 April 2009

Youth an exciting time, no time to pause. Today my school bag is still full, but I study at a more leisurely pace, yet life is good, I'm happy. Bob

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Dream Catcher 08 April 2009

WOW! ! short and sweet but speaks volumes.

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Subroto Chatterjee 08 April 2009

As Byron said: 'The days of our youth, are the days of our glory...' Sweet memories Naseer. Gotcha. Cheers. Subroto.

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Noel Horlanda 07 April 2009

short but terrific! Yeah, that's the right word.

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Vaibhav Pandey 07 April 2009

you really have great poetic skill.....just beautiful sir......10

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Gabby Chamberland 06 April 2009

i think your poem is lovely

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Mamta Agarwal 03 April 2009

its stuff like this memories are made of...lovely the beauty of the poem lies in the truth that everyone can relate to it... with a whimsical smile Mamta

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Maria Barbara Korynt 02 April 2009

Such memories remain in the memory and it are always nice. I am greeting :) Maria Barbara Korynt

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Karla Bardanza 02 April 2009

This dream allows ten thousand interpretations! 10****

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Catrina Heart 02 April 2009

interesting piece, a thought provoking one..........great creation!

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