How Fortunate Are We! Comments

wowwwwwwww Rabia this is too good to come from a 14 year old excellent! ! ! ! ! do keep up such good work and ofcourse God Bless and lots of love from me to you. See how fortunate we are to meet here on Poemhunter Anjali

When I read the title How Fortunate Are We I thought that I should give it a read; when I read it I thought it was worth reading it.............nice one

Oh! My Lord do forgive me, For my absurdity, For me not recognizing Thy Glory, For me being so greedy, Unaware with the worser lives, Of the needy. We need not curse our fates, For He, being the owner, Is giving us grates. Therefore we should be glee, because; How fortunate are we! so deep idea..this poem got...lovely poem..loved it 10/10

Gratefulness for the apparently simple things is the true clue to happiness and peace of mind. There is so much wisdom in here that tomorrow I will ask my own children to read your poem. Congrats.

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this piece of work is a mirror for all of us.. how we forget the blessings bestowed upon us and always are hungry for more than what we have or rather what we deserve.. this brilliant work of urs serves as a reminder how truly we are all blessed..accomplishment in life doesn't lie in possessions but lies in our level of satisfaction! ! ! great work! ! ! loved it...........

' for not recognizing thy glory, for me being so greedy'...absolutely! ..