LALATENDU KABI

LALATENDU KABI

Rairangpur, Mayurbhanj, Odisha, India
Tuesday, May 30, 2017

How Far You Are Indeed! Comments

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It was just a little joke that you didn't bear;
You listened not, and are now so far my dear!
The words on your lips, the grievances in the heart:
You stepped on them and in your silence you crushed!
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Jefferson Carter 30 May 2017

Lalatendu, I can feel the emotion behind the lines, but your ESL(?) problems really harm the poem. Maybe stop writing poetry in English for a while and focus on further mastering the language? You could even read lots of good contemporary poetry in English (Billy Collins, Mary Oliver) to help you improve as a poet. If you'd like, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Tell me how you like it. Yrs, JC

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LALATENDU KABI

LALATENDU KABI

Rairangpur, Mayurbhanj, Odisha, India
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