How Far Must One Fall When The Bottom Is Near Comments

i like it. but i'm in a hurry. ha! perhaps my favorite stanza: Does it the hill have bushes growing there, still within hand's reach? While song's to the ear of some, came not from here. end is near, who is there? if you are really describing a dream, i'd guess you did it well. i'm searching for a shorter poem to put into the March showcase. i believe I SENT YOU A MESSAGE asking permission to shorten a long one of yours, but i don't believe you ever responded! i just now remembered i did that. no wonder (now) that i did not have a poem from you in the showcase already. bri :)