let me shed the hate
that ill applies to anger although consummate
unluckily discerned by trinity and bred
by esoteric tragedies and irregular neglect
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I like that very much. Your feelings are expressed beautifully with perfect words.
lots of powerful words there you should be careful, not all readers might undersatnd them Poetry, should be easy, even children can read it overall I gave you a 10 great job