Tuesday, March 27, 2007

How Does That Make You Feel? Comments

Rating: 4.8

You pinned me down and beat me senseless
at the time I was defenseless;
How does that make you feel?
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Michael Fischer
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... Sheila 17 April 2007

Yes, none of those guys alone would have likely had the nerve to do it. I like the structure and message of this poem. Great write.

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Duncan Wyllie 03 April 2007

But you’re not as intimidating when your friends aren’t participating; How does that make you feel? How indeed? This is a very strong piece by you Michael, top marks a ten Love duncan X

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