How Does It Feel To Be In Problem. Comments

I appreciate your time..my imperfection is seen in my perfection...

In the patched mind of a thirsty traveller.............patched or parched? as is the case sometimes, especially with poets who i believe do not have English as their first language, i do not understand all of what i've read here so far. some of my problem i believe is English usage, but more of it is just unfamiliarity with your country and culture, AND a different way you think from the way i think. i believe you are using symbolism, which i think i rarely use and have some trouble interpreting. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - The desert sands does not forgive a penitent feet............i think i would leave out the a in this line, or change feet to foot. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Neither does the hungry pather puts faith in the gods for a meal...................do you mean panther? ? i Googled definition of pather and did not find one, but i found a definition for pother, a word i did/do not know: poth·er ˈpäT͟Hər/ noun literary noun: pother; plural noun: pothers a commotion or fuss. don't make such a pother! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - [ i HAVE heard of bother as a noun, which would have a similar definition] the latter half of the poem (so far) is more interesting for me to read. favorite line so far: Only for my solitude to be arrested by thoughts of things I had lost. and this partial line: ......in homes carved out from the intelligence of Masons.... age grades.......? i wonder what this is. hmmm? i like the title and the references to it in the poem. let me read another of your poems. bri :)