How Does It Feel? Comments

So much power in this your words speak a lot of truth this is very deep and when the barrel seems extremely light think about the good that has happened and make that gun unbearably heavy were you cannot hold it. Put it down and smile when you feel like giving up until that smile becomes true and you feel like you.

*Applause* Bravo, Bravo. It's outstanding! ~Forever, Grant

'You threw a diamond for a rock' it is written here! Basically very sad poem! Betrayal is something that had started from Adam and Eve when they betrayed the God!

I'll be glad to be the first to comment on this. It felt intriguing to me about how profound a story this first person had experienced witnessing this shooting. It's written in such a way that i'm left wondering how much of it was literal and what was symbolism. I can't imagine this really happening. If this was entirely created by your imagination or dream while you were in bed then you have quite the mind. I'll be keeping an eye on you. btw, If you can, i'm trying to promote and get my work out there and known. I'm about to release my latest conceptual novelty and all twelve pieces are here on this site. They each cover 12 different areas in society that have been infiltrated by the powers that be. A few of them are; The Equation, (Big Banking) Orwellian Youth, (The Family Unit) Justis, (Law) and Each and Every Day (Food) .