Monday, April 10, 2023

How Does Heartbreak Sound? Comments

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language of love written in sheet music
played by heartbeats while drops fall without rain
where mellow rhythms are making my mind sick
like the melodies pounding on my brain
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Sagi Writes
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Terence Craddock 14 April 2023

This beautifully written poem is truly unique, I have never heard the sound of heartbreak expressed this well before, with 'sheet music played by heartbeats while drops fall without rain'; I can hear saudade in it.

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I wrote the poem 'Heartbreak Blood Rain Falling', inspired by the poem 'How Does Heartbreak Sound? ', by the poet Sagi Writes and dedicated to Sagi Writes.

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