James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
Sunday, February 26, 2017

How Does A Good Modern Poet Survive Comments

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The antagonist, some call them enimies,
Those that hold life and death in simple utterance.
Living for naught but their pleasure.
As we cover the earth to serve the rich,
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Bri Edwards 16 March 2017

iip, this should give some readers pause. whatever THAT means! ! ! this will 'work' for the showcase, March 2017. it represents you well (enough) , i think, as a poet. it could use some editing, but i choose not to do any this time. ha ha. If all the worthless word's could fill a large dump, Would you then speak different words that would say what? .............i like these lines though i may not agree ..........................................totally. i think words are useless if they are not used, if they are used improperly, OR if they are misunderstood/not understood! bri :)

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 08 March 2017

The heart cannot be silent! Dorothy Alves Holmes Singing Still

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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