Wednesday, August 29, 2012

How Do You Fix It? Comments

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When things are broken and out of place
how do you fix it?
when dreams you held in your hands so dearly
suddenly-you-yourself destroyed them
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Kasia Fedyk
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Anita Sehgal 09 September 2012

poem from the heart

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Hamid Negah 05 September 2012

Kasia, as before your poem is too lovely.

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Payal Parande 04 September 2012

wow....that is the word my mind keep saying with each word and even though it is finished it still is... beautiful mam just beautiful.....what i am feeling right now after reading your wonderful piece is beyond explanation. thank you so much for sharing such splendid piece love you, payal

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The Reader 30 August 2012

To me the approach of this poem seems to be mystic, & a mystic poet is one who reveals in his poetry soul's relationship with God, & analyses the states of soul and man's predicament in this earth & beyond.The invocation in the last lines connects the poet to God...

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Neela Nath Das 30 August 2012

A tone of sadness I feel in this poem. Kasi, lt touched the strings of my heart.

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