Thursday, June 2, 2005

How Do I Thank You? Comments

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I was driving by the park yesterday and saw that girl.
She was holding a beer while leaning back on some scroungy guy.
I remember when she was in your class in 5th grade...she's only 16.
Does her mother know this is what she does
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Brian Dorn 17 April 2006

Mary, another interesting glimpse into your world. An interesting tribute to the maturity of your daughters as well as you as a Mom (and of course, Dad) . Brian

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Duncan Wyllie 27 March 2006

And we are amazed by your caring heart and kind words.What fortunate Children you have, A mother with insight who is willing to show them the best way she knows how and all with a kind heart.Yes this can really change the world for the better.Love Duncan

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Poetry Hound 02 June 2005

More of an essay or mini-prose than a poem, but I like the sentiments.

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A. B. 02 June 2005

Mary, this is a good poem.You don't just have to thank your daughters for being such good daughters, You should be thanked too. Cus it's because of you, they are who they are today. Nice poem, really.

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Herbert Nehrlich1 02 June 2005

And I am amazed as well. Very timely poem Mary and well done. Your poems say a lot about you and it is refreshing and uplifting to read them. I call them esperance poems. Best wishes, Herbert P.S.: Please check your inbox.

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